Glengarry Glen Ross
can someone help me to check the intro?
Glengarry Glen Ross is one of David Mamet’s best well-known plays produced in 1982. The play tells a story of four real estate salesmen struggling with their life in a cruel competition, which assigned by two owners of the real estate agency, Mitch and Murray. In the play, each character pursues a dream. Such as Williamson, who wants to handle his workers well, and earns a decent reputation; Levene, who wants to earn back his reputation and support his daughter; Aaronow, who wants to keep self safe from any danger; Moss, who wants to be rich, and Roma, who wants to win the Cadillac car in the competition; however, in fact, Mamet is trying to condemning their interpretation of the “dream” by describing how each character in the play performs when their dreams collide together. For instance, they are mean to each other, taking advantages of each other and trapping each other.
Hi, Bryan!
Your first sentence is far too short, you tend to repeat information and your punctuation is a bit muddled. Now that you are getting older all essays should start with a longer and stronger sentence which we call a “grabber” and it grabs your readers’ attention and holds it. Could I suggest something like this -
Produced in 1982, “Glengarry Glen Ross” is one of David Mamet’s best known plays in which he tells a story of four real estate salesmen struggling with their lives in a cruel competition which is assigned by the agency’s two owners, Mitch and Murray, where each character pursues a dream. These characters include Williamson, who wants to handle his workers well and earn a decent reputation; Levene, who wants to earn back his reputation and support his daughter; Aaronow, who wants to keep himself safe from any danger; Moss, who wants to be rich, and Roma who wants to win the Cadillac car in the competition. However, Mamet tries to condemn their interpretations of their “dreams” by describing how each character in the play performs when their dreams collide and they are mean, take advantage or trap each other.
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